The way I will revise my first draft of my creative non-fiction essay is by re-writing my draft over again and staying on topic of what i am writing about and to incorporate more showing scenes for this essay. Being more descriptive and more detailed of what i am talking about is also an important thing that i need to improve for my writing skills.
I wake up on Sunday morning feeling l had just had a hangover even though I did not have a hangover. My mother barges into my room like she is a soldier reporting for duty to tell me that she wanted to have her space and wanted to move out. My mind is racing like I am driving a formula one car. I am clueless like a child and do not what to say, just like how someone tells you good news and your jaw drops to the floor and have that moment of silence. That is how I felt after she had told me those news because I did not expect to be told that just like when a guy is told by his girlfriend or wife that she is pregnant after four months of not knowing anything.
Writing Process
Explain the actual Process: I usually spend about an hour, maybe two and brainstorm of what I am going to write about. I then write down the story and the plot, the main characters and what the story is about. In this case this writing project is about myself. I had to think about what happen to me in the past month because this is a one month memoir about myself. Critique: The first idea that came to my mind was the only thing at the time that I was able to come up with. Sometimes I feel like my idea of what I am writing about that has happen in the past month might work or will not work at all because it is hard for me to write a thousand words and put the “ showing scenes and the “telling scenes” of what has happen to me in the past month. The hardest part is elaborating on something that has happen to me in the past month for about three pages long. When it comes to writing about myself it becomes very vague for me to do because there is so much write. Week Five Reflection Class: In class we had discussed more about our assignments and getting caught up with our work and start writing and revising our creative nonfiction essay. I am looking forward in finishing my non-fiction essay because for me it is an accomplishment for me and for me to share it with the class is also a good experience because the classmates can read about me and what goes on in my life. Home: The things that has been going on at home a pretty much the same thing with my mother. We do not have the best relationship because of what has been going on with me and what I have been going through with her and myself. |
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